If I Were A Moon Poem by Patti Masterman

If I Were A Moon

Rating: 5.0


If I were a moon, I'd chase your sun,
Or if a butterfly, you'd be the one
Flower, that I could not resist;
Or if a valley, your green I would kiss,
And if a cloud, when the day is done,
The spark of lightning, the storm's begun.

If you were death, I'd be the tomb,
If you were birth, I'd be the womb,
And if you were higher to reach than the sky,
I'd hitchhike the meteors, whistling by-
For love is the field that holds the whole world,
As patiently, patiently time is unfurled.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 24 February 2012

Wonderful poem Really one of your masterpieces, Patti. Very nice expression of love. Excellent

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Stevens Cadet 22 February 2012

Really like this one. Love the transition of words

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Valerie Dohren 22 February 2012

A lovely write Patti.

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Eric Cockrell 21 February 2012

love this one... the very rhythm of love!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 20 February 2012

This is really beautiful and excellent. I love the word choice and the style.

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