If..... Poem by simran arora

If.....

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If,
i would be a bird in the sky,
i would rule the heights i deserve,
i would rest in the lap of stars,
i would resemble every turn......

If,
i would be a tear in your eyes,
i would role down in your lips,
i would rest in your heart,
i would emerge some where
in the glory of dark....

If
i would be a flower on the land,
i would wish to grow on the land of war,
where i would be watered by blood,
and killed at a battle as a worrier....

If
i would be a dream in your heart,
i would wish to raise your thought,
i would care for your acts,
would weave your desire...

BUT IF I WOULD BE ME....then....?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 06 July 2013

Amazing lines with a lovely flow, very thought provoking! You show great potential!

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Gaius Gbeti Kafui 27 June 2013

If really portray the desire to be part of an entity.it pretty interesting.

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Gaius Gbeti Kafui 27 June 2013

if really portray the desire to be part of an entity.personally i like the piece.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 26 June 2013

If i would be is a very nice poem, Simran. Nice thoughts.

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Vishal Sharma 22 June 2013

this poem reminded me my ex girlfriend, who took used to write like this great poem and memorable lines

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