simran arora

Rookie (22-july-1996 / gurgon)

Freedom......


For me,
my freedom is at the priority,
conbination of adjustment,
and compromises in majority....


For me,
my freedom is my wisdom,
and wants to rais me up from all critic,
with a working mind, out of room....


For me,
my freedom is to bound me,
and not to set me free,
it dont mean to rule the streets,
but to build a safe field...


For me,
my freedom dont mean to disgide,
but work on me,
and on my passion for high lights,
it dont mean to fallow the black shadows,
but to grow and colour our own rose....


For me,
my freedom is not be fool anyone,
but to proud someone,
and to prove everyone,
that,
my freedom dont mean to rule the clouds,
but to land on a safe tree,
aside of all pain,
under a sky of proud,
for what i did, what i am.....

Submitted: Sunday, June 23, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 4,085 Points Hazel Durham (7/6/2013 11:36:00 AM)

    Freedom is about the truth we find within ourselves! !
    I agree with Kanniappan if you put it in poetic form, you show great promise! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/1/2013 2:59:00 PM)

    a great write on freedom. Enjoyed the read. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (7/1/2013 10:53:00 AM)

    good write.. poignant... true to heart... love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (6/30/2013 9:15:00 AM)

    nice suggestion
    but a well read poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (6/30/2013 5:54:00 AM)

    I agree with Kinniappan below. At the moment it is prose. Read other poets first and then write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,192 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (6/23/2013 12:48:00 PM)

    Dear Simran Arora,
    I read your topic 'Freedom' I understand your interest. But can you arrange the same in small lines and paragraphs? as follows:

    For me,
    my freedom is at the priority,
    combination of adjustment,
    and compromises in majority....

    For me,
    my freedom is my wisdom,
    And wants to raise me up from all critic,
    with a working mind, out of room.... (likewise) .

    Congratulations. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Survi Sharma (6/23/2013 4:27:00 AM)

    nice poem
    as dhawan said
    great write and mature one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (6/23/2013 3:45:00 AM)

    mature write
    inner sense meaning poem
    written good
    i like it (Report) Reply

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