I Will Leave You Silently Poem by Valerie Dohren

I Will Leave You Silently

Rating: 5.0


I will leave you silently
In the still of night,
When the birds have nested long,
And the moon grows bright.

You won’t see me leaving then,
As in fullest day -
After twilight’s shadows fall
I will slip away.

I won’t stir you from your sleep,
You’ll not see me cry -
I will leave you silently
When I say goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 07 May 2014

Did not like it, We all love you and need you and Hate the idea of you leaving. Don't you dare, Leave this site all bare! ! !

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Jim Jonson 07 May 2014

Wow this is very captivating, ith a limited number of words you could create an amazing theme applicable for people with emotions, such a theme benig carried away with a smooth rhyme scheme. Well done, keep pening.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 08 May 2014

A fantastic piece with wonderful images

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What a way to go! It is my wish too. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Hazel Durham 09 May 2014

Beautiful write with such wonderful imagery!

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Mike Barrett 13 July 2014

Valerie, Absolutely beautiful - more than touching. Bravo!

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Lucifera Santez 25 May 2014

this one is amazing Val. really awesome. loved it. my fav lines, I won’t stir you from your sleep, You’ll not see me cry - I will leave you silently When I say goodbye.

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No you wouldn't Not with our a fight I will keep my eyes open Even in the middle of the night Well done my friend!

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A shout of silence that breaks the heart with tears that screams: Please don't leave me that way! Well done my friend!

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Paul Reed 18 May 2014

A delicate and sensitive poem, beautifully understated

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