hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,557 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Shall Feel - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Support the effort I make
Provide the child sweet biscuit instead of cake
See the change on his face
You need not go anywhere to find love traces

Just look at what I create
With blessings clearly state
That I am ordinary but not weak
I can honestly speak

Just pray
For my onward way
To be peaceful and constructive
For all to see themselves and believe

Think if world can come close
Get ready and pose
For one slogan
We are all human

I think that shall be memorable gift
Without any bitterness or rift
I shall feel worthy of good wishes
That shall allow me a picture on canvass to finish


Comments about I Shall Feel by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 38,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/30/2014 11:16:00 AM)

    Very good

    Michael Anthony Lyles4 minutes ago
    Well written, great flow. That shall allow me a picture on canvass to finish
    That was a great line to end on
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  • Gold Star - 38,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/30/2014 11:16:00 AM)

    good

    Pirin Wind6 minutes ago
    good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/30/2014 11:02:00 AM)

    Support the effort I make
    Provide the child sweet biscuit instead of cake (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 30, 2014



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