I Open My Hand And... Poem by Marcus McKinley

I Open My Hand And...

Rating: 5.0


The taraxo achos seeds
Blow...
Gently into the breeze
Aloft, with a wish of safe return
And, with that...

All my dreams scatter
Across the night sky

Soaring, reminiscing,
Hoping one day again,
to be...
The sparkle in your eye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 July 2010

How sweet! 'All my dreams scatter/across the night sky' Hoping one day again/ toi be/the sparkle in your eye. You order your words, as such, they just flow across and down the page. A 10 [ some times the vote does not register] any way I give this poem a a ten.

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