Marcus McKinley

Rookie - 175 Points (EARTH)

A New Day - Poem by Marcus McKinley

Morning starts with my ringing alarm
It pommels my senses
Like a seasoned pugilist
Taunting me to strike back
Yet it means no harm
It's just telling me now the day commences
In its silence I receive its gist
And rise with a yawn then attack

Comments about A New Day by Marcus McKinley

  • Rookie - 163 Points Meena Mustafa (7/2/2013 3:20:00 PM)

    Nice write :) thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (2/16/2011 1:47:00 AM)

    The background is same but everyday is new in its begining. I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (8/6/2010 11:10:00 AM)

    Awesome! I can relate to the ringing alarm. Love the snooze button! A lovely freshness in the write..yes a new day has begun. Well done; D (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,581 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (8/4/2010 1:22:00 PM)

    Really alarming your poetic ringing. Day commences and we have to attack it. Fantastic. The expression of just the day of 2010. Run long...write more.....

    pranab (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/28/2010 11:55:00 AM)

    Clock is but shackle to imprison us in a stipulated format …why not unshackle us …is the theme of this wonderful poetry …I got booted… thanks for sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
    10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 27, 2010

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