Kumud Ranjan

Rookie (8th July / India)

I Miss You - Poem by Kumud Ranjan

You are gone from my life, still
I miss you a lot my friend
Whenever I'd to share anything
You heard always my nonsense

Whenever tears rolled from my eyes
My heartfelt any inner pain
You were always there to soothe me
Never had I doubt in approaching you
with you never felt shame on my ignorance
ever I was in dilemma or in haze
you were always there patting my back

one day something happened never I’d wished of
I broke at you, asked you to leave
You felt insulted and you left
I never meant of that you know too
So far you solved all my problems
Please solve this one more to me
How to bring you back plz tell me

Cause the day you were gone
I think now closing my eyes alone
How eager where you to help me
How you cared for me, praised me
I can portray your picture how delicious
Dishes you used to send for me

Your memories flood in my mind
Why I feel wind is wet as your tears
I wish you to be again here
At night I pray to god and talk to you
You say in my dreams you’re still there
As I open my eyes I fill with a guilt
Why I let you go, why I lost you

I still know you’re with me even now
But why you’re hiding I don’t know
I trust I’ll see you again so tell me
Should I say good bye or wait
Until you with your smile I don’t see.

Comments about I Miss You by Kumud Ranjan

  • Rookie - 11 Points Aastha Uppal (12/23/2009 11:52:00 PM)

    really a special poem.. everyone can relate to it because at some time in our lifes all of us start taking our dear ones, who are closest to us for granted and unknowingly hurt them. and when they are more with us we want them to be back in our lifes..
    a heart-felt poem. too good. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 1 Points Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (12/14/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    A wonderful expression of how emotional outburst can break a relation.Pang of separation also is nicely depicted. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rashmi Raj (12/9/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    simple & sober, still touching.........
    a must read poem 4 all...
    enjoyed reading...
    thnxx 4 gifting such a lovely poem to all of us.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 82,441 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2009 6:35:00 AM)

    Whenever tears rolled from my eyes
    My heartfelt any inner pain
    You were always there to soothe me
    Never had I doubt in approaching you
    lovely poem with great feeling.. oliked it and admire it....10

    read mine...miss i mii you.....mom i miss you....come back...home biound (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luwi Habte (10/16/2009 2:53:00 AM)

    great poem for a friend
    friendship is a treasure that no one can measure
    nice piece poet there
    luwi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jyoti Saxena (10/15/2009 12:55:00 AM)

    i can feel yr pain seering right thru me as i too hd lost my childhood friend for almost ten years but then keeping aside all my ego i surrenderd to my love for her and now we are like old times - my advise to you dear kumud is not to lose the precious time-go and show yr friend how much you miss him/her and i am sure all will be set right -god is alwayz with good friends-a touching poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nalathai Vongjalorn (10/11/2009 12:36:00 AM)

    Love the poem so much it full of feelings wow just amazing it a 10 for sure (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sameera Sameer (9/16/2009 12:56:00 PM)

    loved it, full of feelings, simply..beautiful O.O (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Mcmanus (9/14/2009 5:51:00 PM)

    a very nice write about a strong, emotional experience. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (9/14/2009 10:39:00 AM)

    one of those heart felt- 'i miss you' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (9/12/2009 4:51:00 AM)

    A love lost can be painful to bear. Your poem is excellent but it would have been much better if you had broke it up into stanza's. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 605 Points Almedia Knight-Oliver (9/11/2009 4:28:00 PM)

    Oftentimes we hurt the one we love and care about.This is an interesting line: So far you solved all my problems' your plea is for your friend to tell you how to bring him/her back to you. I enjoyed reading this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (9/11/2009 3:23:00 PM)

    a moving poem! a sad appeal/

    well expressed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Disturbed angel in a straight jacket (9/11/2009 12:39:00 PM)

    nice, thank you for the invatation to read it.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (9/10/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    a beautiful and touching poem.thanx for sharing
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (9/10/2009 4:59:00 AM)

    If there were more care there should be more hurt that is the specific symptoms of the true divine love our ancient classics are the results, shakundalam, meghasandesham, and east west also, thanks for sharing the good work 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Charlene Antersijn (9/10/2009 4:44:00 AM)

    Yeah I still misses that person
    There is no other person to
    fill that quality of friendship
    this person gave me (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 826 Points Ency Bearis (9/9/2009 12:39:00 PM)

    a moving poem...deppressing thoughts expressed well....
    stanzas with nice flow to read....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie .x.1.FAZiNATiNG BiYTCH.x. >ALiCiA< (9/9/2009 8:08:00 AM)

    i AM SO FEELiNG THiS ONE....
    2 BE HiS FRiEND BUT HiM && THE
    **10...** (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 185 Points Anju Addanki (9/1/2009 4:48:00 AM)

    Very touchy with lot of feelings in it.good one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 7, 2011

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