I Kept On Walking
Fixed my eyes on the world
Strived to be a free bird
Kept aside all the herds
To be a man,
who does the talking
I kept on walking
My aims were like a beautiful sky
Its zenith required more than a try
Ordeal ahead was free from lies
Had to finish before the soul dies
My honest deeds did the talking
Without a hush, I kept on walking
Leaping all the tumbling stones
Beaming despite breaking my bones
I 'd to cover the journey alone
To be a Man
who does the talking
I kept on walking
Suddenly, my journey got tied
Besides me danced my bride
All my aims got flayed
New foundation need to be laid
Problems kept on flocking
And still, I kept on walking
My life became totally shallow
Dragged into deathly hallows
Then God brightened the day
When my baby had the say
Negating being its ultimate prey
I started the journey afresh
Kept all my aims suppressed
And I just kept on walking
Till the heavens came knocking
A very nice poem. The thought flows softly like an unimpeded free flowing stream.
Very Nice poem. Even though your poem is very sad. But I really like your way of writing.
My aims were like a beautiful sky Its zenith required more than a try Ordeal ahead was free from lies Had to finish before this soul dies My honest deeds were doing the talking Without a hush, i kept on walking My life became totally shallow Dragging into deathly hallows Then the god brightened the day When my baby had the say Negating being its ultimate prey I started the journey afresh Keeping all my aims suppressed I kept on walking Till the heavens came knocking the truths set the tone of the poem which have been furnished with ease and the grief behind the dream and aim have worked out so perfect........right from your heart! !
up in the third paragraph i reccomend you switch the wording to: beaming despite my breaking bones. just a little suggestion (: i enjoyed the journey theme, it's a good message, never let your head down.
striking and powerful and a rhythmic song...much to provide...loved ur creation
The will power in your body protect your soul to be durable in any condition, the sensation of self embrace even hurt or tormented bold but you still standing to keep walking....so never stop in any reason for your life move smoothly in any challenge in future. Beautiful write Sharad! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The poem is essentially very good - there are two words I would change, however, these being `gawking` and `nerds.` Perhaps instead of `gawking` you could replace this with `fixing`, and `nerds` maybe could be replaed with `herds` if you want to maintain the rhyme.