Dr.Rajendra Tela,Nirantar


I Kept Living In Darkness - Poem by Dr.Rajendra Tela,Nirantar

I kept
Living in darkness
With pessimism
In my
Heart and mind
You always
Lived in light
With an
Enlightened
Heart and mind
But than
I fail to understand
Why you did not
Do any thing
To take me out Of
Darkness
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Pessism, optimism, attitude, life
Dr.Rajendra Tela, Nirantar

Comments about I Kept Living In Darkness by Dr.Rajendra Tela,Nirantar

  • Gold Star - 19,612 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/19/2013 1:48:00 AM)

    No one can take you out of darkness, it is your choice to do it or not. There seems to be a subtle under tone of blame, for someone failing to understand. Just seemed to come across to me that way. Definitely liked this
    poem though. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 790 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (10/8/2013 2:39:00 AM)

    Living in darkness or in light
    It will always be our conscious choice
    For this life to make it dull or bright
    All we have to do is to listen to the inner voice....

    (Good poem - keep writing) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (10/7/2013 11:45:00 PM)

    Meaningful write...many can relate! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 26, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, September 27, 2013


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