I Kept Living In Darkness Poem by Dr.Rajendra Tela,Nirantar

I Kept Living In Darkness

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I kept
Living in darkness
With pessimism
In my
Heart and mind
You always
Lived in light
With an
Enlightened
Heart and mind
But than
I fail to understand
Why you did not
Do any thing
To take me out Of
Darkness
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Pessism, optimism, attitude, life
Dr.Rajendra Tela, Nirantar
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 19 October 2013

No one can take you out of darkness, it is your choice to do it or not. There seems to be a subtle under tone of blame, for someone failing to understand. Just seemed to come across to me that way. Definitely liked this poem though. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Living in darkness or in light It will always be our conscious choice For this life to make it dull or bright All we have to do is to listen to the inner voice.... (Good poem - keep writing)

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Marvin Brato 07 October 2013

Meaningful write...many can relate!

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