I Keep On Telling I Am Good Poem by Asif Andalib
I Keep On Telling I Am Good
I keep on telling I am good
But it doesn't change my sad mood
I would be happy if I could
But the world is cruel and shrewd
I put on clothes I am not rude
But I feel like I am stark nude
I am starving though there is food
But there's no one like Robinhood
It's God's will I have understood
But my heart burns like a firewood
Such rhyming verse, twitching every nerve with pain! Great job Asif! !
Everybody is born good. Circumstances shape him into bad. Once he understands the tricks of fate, he comes back to good nature. From the cries you make, one can conclude that your mind is benign. Best wishes Andalib.
A heartfelt plea to find some happiness in this cold world, great write!
nicely penned in rhythmic way.i like the sense of humor refers to Robinhood. cheers~nb
Great poem! That is pretty much me right there. Always having to hind your feelings and keep everything inside, starving for love and affection and freedom but having your heart riped out anyway. Longing for so much more! ! ! Truely enjoyed this piece! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Nice rhymes..a poem which is different from others, kind of exploring the self. Nice write.