Asif Andalib

Rookie (27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

Karma Theory Of Islam Poem by Asif Andalib

God has written down in brief
Our endless life story
That is being played
On the seven-storied stage of sky!
At the same time it’s also true:
We are the architects
Of our own future
Cause we get result of what we do!

However we’ll have the final result
Of our actions on the Day of Resurrection!

God acts according to plans
We should also plan our future
And try to make it happen.

Even God does not know everything
In absolute detail
And He doesn’t need to know it.
It is an endless story
Even God forgets some things
After zillions and zillions of years
That’s one of the reasons
Why God has written down every important matter
Be it big or small on Laohay Mahfuz.
Therefore we should also read and write
To preserve and spread our wisdom.

There are seventy thousand paths
That lead to paradise
For example
Path of Belief
Path of Truthfulness
Path of Remembrance of God
Path of Charity
Path of Salat
Path of Fasting
Path of Tax
Path of Hajj
And so on.
All the aforesaid paths are straight paths
That leads to respective gates of paradise!
In fact Pool Sirat has seventy thousand levels
All end at the respective gates of paradise!
The Gate of Faith of paradise is the biggest
And it is the must have access to paradise.

For a hassle-free journey to paradise
One needs to go through at least
The following paths
Path of Belief
Path of Patience
Path of Preaching of the Truth
And path of any other good work

If you are a firm believer
You will be able to go to paradise
Through the Gate of Belief
If you are a truthful person
You will be able to go to paradise
Through the Gate of Truthfulness
And so forth

So you see it’s very easy to go to paradise
But it’s very difficult
To be very prestigious
In the eyes of God.

N.B. - Laohay Mahfuz is God's Diary and Pool Sirat is bridges of light that will connect the field of Judgment Day and paradise between them will be hell.

Submitted: Monday, November 24, 2008
Edited: Friday, January 14, 2011

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  • Gold Star - 25,578 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/14/2014 10:46:00 PM)

    I honor your views but differ with your thoughts that God forgets. He never forgets, He knows the past, He knows the present and He knows the future. Lohe Mahfooz is a write in which every thing is written, e.g.. it was written that I shall disagree with your thoughts and shall let you know through a comment. But it was at all not a binding on me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alexis Rolon (3/11/2009 9:48:00 PM)

    I think it is pretty good! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jerry Abrahamson (12/31/2008 2:01:00 PM)

    Great Poem keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Adriana Veloso (12/5/2008 3:21:00 PM)

    wonderful poem
    wonderful poet

    Congratulations (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lulu E (12/5/2008 9:40:00 AM)

    NICE POME......................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Costa Anakiev (12/5/2008 5:12:00 AM)

    i'm afraid it's nearly impossible speak the truth always. if you can, you're great. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Katherine Sessor (12/3/2008 5:40:00 AM)

    A great poem with a great message! I really like it!

    Kat ^-^ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kite Remedy (11/27/2008 10:00:00 PM)

    My religion is also Islam, and your poem seems to bring me into another verge of it..
    Great piece of work.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (11/27/2008 6:10:00 AM)

    thanks for sharing.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew Close (11/27/2008 4:43:00 AM)

    good poem, I have no undersatnding of islam but your poem seems to speak very honnestly about the faith mentioned in the title. also the first line was amazing, what an opener! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Estrella Baldemosa (11/26/2008 11:23:00 PM)

    thanks for inviting and sharing this theory in islam. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,544 Points Kassem Oude (11/26/2008 2:25:00 PM)

    Dear great poet, I think right path to paradise is not by preaching for God teachings and urging people to abide by God's laws only but also by good deeds here on earth towards God's people, what is worth of consideration isn't what someone believes in but what is how dealing with others and the good he could offer to them. Your writing is sheer and beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naru Kaede (11/26/2008 11:08:00 AM)

    You're write this very well,
    If I... I want to go paradise with path of salat,
    But, think that I'm still not very often salat, , just make me worry, ,
    Hehehehe, , but I'll keep trying for Allah, ,

    Wassalamualaikum, ,
    Naru Kaede

    NB: Give u 10++ for this... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sangnam Nam (11/26/2008 10:30:00 AM)

    You can be prestegious
    if only you could
    be able to be
    for God is the one who sees
    you not what you want to be seen as (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Venus McHeart (11/26/2008 10:09:00 AM)

    its a nice poem i must said.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Sherif Monem (11/26/2008 8:40:00 AM)

    Very beautiful Asif Andalib. Ttank u very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (11/26/2008 7:36:00 AM)

    A well written piece explaining Islam to us, well done
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points premji premji (11/26/2008 4:27:00 AM)

    the paths of Allah
    starts from love
    through love
    to love...
    love incarnate......
    supreem bliss....
    10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Er.(dr.) Pradeep Kumar Mohanty (11/26/2008 4:09:00 AM)

    You are very much right. I do agree with u. Thanx for ur abstract thought..
    Khud ko mita do
    Khudah mil jayega.
    - Pradeep (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fasika Ayalew (11/26/2008 2:48:00 AM)

    Yes the virtue of goodness is what underlies all truth. Nice view (Report) Reply

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