I Fear You Kill Your Self Poem by sekharan pookkat

I Fear You Kill Your Self

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I fear
you kill your self
if you drink
much wine
to stand straight
your head
in the robs
of a thief, a hidden bride!
I fear
you kill your self
if you ignore
your sins may be payed
in this world
and ignore
the warning sins
of your body
and enjoy life
and know
it is not life

Friday, July 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
dedicated for all who spoiled their lives consuming alcohol
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 25 July 2016

I fear You kill yourself If you drink much wine to stand straight- - - - - -Yes alchoholism is a very serious problem that ruins not only the life of the person who is addicted, but also his entire family.Apart from being a drainer on finance it robs the individual of sane thinking.The addicted person is prone to many health hazards.It also creates many social nuisance and one of the reasons behind crime.Thanks for sharing a nice poem on this social issue.

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Thanks for the dutiful share need of the hour dear poet

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Kelly Kurt 16 July 2016

I used to drink heavily, now I warn my young friends to be careful. Nicely written and shared, Sekharan. Thanks

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