Humming Birds Poem by sekharan pookkat

Humming Birds

Rating: 5.0


Southern wind blew strongly
As you were angry with me
I was sitting in our out house
Watching leaves fling through the air.

Rain drops scattered in the porch
And I thought about a cup of hot coffee
My body was shivering in cold breeze
Lanterns were swinging in the wind.

Ink spread in the paper and stained
Like the humming birds, flying from flowers
Darkness spread over outside.
And I closed my pages for a new dawn.

Saturday, May 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
some body is waiting outside.so I closed my pages
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 02 May 2017

Beautiful poem on the descending dusk with a lovely image of humming birds! A full 10

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Sanjukta Nag 20 August 2015

beautiful imagery and the simile of humming birds.

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Hazel Durham 25 May 2015

Stunning write that flows with such ease, and a beautiful ending!

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