Miroslava Odalovic

Rookie - 86 Points (Montenegro)

I Dreamt Of Sunshine - Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

I dreamt of sunshine in water pools
Of drops and ripples smiling though undone
Of a moonlit Luna and her ancient fools
Barking at the newly born sun

I dreamt of people their hands and eyes
Of sunscraped glitter flashing through the storm
I burn each time when somebody dies
Again to light up again to be born

I dreamt of my Aprils my springs and risen words
To clay dead live in the skies above
I know I'm alive for it still hurts
To live here again knowing there's no love

In someone else's dream to see
Someone else's vision to be


Comments about I Dreamt Of Sunshine by Miroslava Odalovic

  • (8/15/2016 11:53:00 PM)


    Transmutation?
    To live vicariously thru others?
    A sad and incomplete life is,
    But if it gives poems like this
    Well rewarded, the reader be.
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  • (8/15/2016 7:02:00 PM)


    Nicely done sonnet. Rhyme pattern typical Elizabethan Sonnet. Hard to do but you did it well. Some lines do not have a true rhyme but it is very pleasing nevertheless. Congrats on having it chosen as member poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • (8/15/2016 1:40:00 PM)


    very well expressed throughout. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (8/15/2016 11:32:00 AM)


    Wonderful poetry. Liked every line of it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (8/15/2016 11:30:00 AM)


    To live here again knowing there is no love.
    Touching expression.
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  • Bernard Snyder (8/15/2016 8:50:00 AM)


    Outstanding poem! I love the rhyme scheme. Amazing stuff! ! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/15/2016 6:37:00 AM)


    Newly born sun! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Tapan M. Saren (8/15/2016 3:03:00 AM)


    Beautiful expression indeed... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 22, 2012



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