Poetheart Morgan

Rookie - 348 Points (05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

I Dont Know Change The Tire! - Poem by Poetheart Morgan

I cry for some few reasons
when I don't have a chocolate cake
when they break my W&N kit paint
When i hear that familiar sound

Oh! just needed to rolling by the road
but
the blast holding my arms
shaking me and saying to me
you have to change the tire!

What? ? ?

AH! At this moment
hot tears
flowing out of me
not precious and fine
transparent and contained
so convenient
but together with hiccups
and convulsions
inconvenient

am i ~ thick ~ enough?
What did i wrong?
i will shake my butt
and the fingers too
to ask for a scarf
and a big man to do

Nothing more was broken
or in pieces by the road
not more tears just feeling
the song of my motor


Comments about I Dont Know Change The Tire! by Poetheart Morgan

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (7/8/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    lovely poem.the road solicits every car but if flat tire allows.like the life we may have lots of flat tires but they can never stop us
    wonderful ~nb (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (7/8/2013 12:58:00 AM)

    a good read. an emotional poem. enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (7/5/2013 4:53:00 PM)

    Enjoyable read, nice poem.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,714 Points Ramesh Rai (7/4/2013 11:41:00 AM)

    sincere write devoted all strength of your heart. so so nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 249 Points Vipins Puthooran (7/3/2013 6:55:00 AM)

    Good emotion/a very good one! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/1/2013 10:51:00 AM)

    Great poem, good flow and emotion, emotive. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 363 Points David Wood (7/1/2013 5:32:00 AM)

    Oh the joys of motoring along in this world. Sometimes we all get a flat tyre. Lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (6/30/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    nice
    gud write
    praiseworthy (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


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