Poetheart Morgan

Rookie - 397 Points (05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

I Dont Know Change The Tire! - Poem by Poetheart Morgan

I cry for some few reasons
when I don't have a chocolate cake
when they break my W&N kit paint
When i hear that familiar sound

Oh! just needed to rolling by the road
the blast holding my arms
shaking me and saying to me
you have to change the tire!

What? ? ?

AH! At this moment
hot tears
flowing out of me
not precious and fine
transparent and contained
so convenient
but together with hiccups
and convulsions

am i ~ thick ~ enough?
What did i wrong?
i will shake my butt
and the fingers too
to ask for a scarf
and a big man to do

Nothing more was broken
or in pieces by the road
not more tears just feeling
the song of my motor

Comments about I Dont Know Change The Tire! by Poetheart Morgan

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (7/8/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    lovely poem.the road solicits every car but if flat tire allows.like the life we may have lots of flat tires but they can never stop us
    wonderful ~nb (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (7/8/2013 12:58:00 AM)

    a good read. an emotional poem. enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 306 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (7/5/2013 4:53:00 PM)

    Enjoyable read, nice poem.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,821 Points Ramesh Rai (7/4/2013 11:41:00 AM)

    sincere write devoted all strength of your heart. so so nice. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (7/3/2013 6:55:00 AM)

    Good emotion/a very good one! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (7/1/2013 10:51:00 AM)

    Great poem, good flow and emotion, emotive. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,863 Points David Wood (7/1/2013 5:32:00 AM)

    Oh the joys of motoring along in this world. Sometimes we all get a flat tyre. Lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (6/30/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    gud write
    praiseworthy (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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