Poetheart (back)

(05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

I can not accept!


Since i am reading you
I am stuck
the words don't flow
and fight between them
those boxes of bees
are pleading for me

i don't gave you attention, is not?
but was the incredible noise
that surround me and stuns me
i can't hear your voice
in return, you are so lonely

My only sense is my vision
seeing you.fenced on this 6 walls
no air, breathless
and i can not accept
such a box full of dissonance

I have mine own
with windows and doors
built long ago
moving from owner to owner
and finally in my own hands

inside i placed my bones!

but my soul escaped
nothing is perfect
sprinkled like seed
in a chosen soil by the wind

I hope you comprehend!

I can not be complete
in a box
six-sided
and tweet!

Submitted: Friday, April 26, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 25, 2013

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Open heart! Just like that!

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  • Rookie - 555 Points Tiku . (5/3/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    beautiful ink.flow, style and concept is wonderful.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 562 Points Unwritten Soul (4/30/2013 12:07:00 PM)

    Around 6 closed wall, you nicely imagined that if we are locked by those life walls...i am sure there will be door and windows for us out from this concrete and strong walls...anywhere we go, we will find a way home! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 717 Points Thomas A Robinson (4/28/2013 7:16:00 PM)

    Diamonds have turned to dust
    all the blood has dried
    now it has turned to rust
    what is dead was once alive
    Dreams are now specks of stars
    so far away that they're gone
    battled as if from mars
    now no longer considered home (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 230 Points Poetheart Morgan (4/27/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    Yes, Poet, when i finished that poem, i was exhausted! poems do that to me. And hurts so much. Thanks Poet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 783 Points Sallam Yassin (4/27/2013 4:18:00 AM)

    in be seeded out of box
    and sent your soul free to
    that soil chosen
    by wind by will /nice to be dwelt by this motion (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,222 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/26/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    My soul escaped, nothing is perfect. good poem.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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