I Do Not.. Poem by Deepti Agarwal

I Do Not..

Rating: 4.9


I Do not...
I do not teach
for fame or gain..

I do not love to
be loved in return...

I do not smile to
cross those miles..

I do not dress
to impress, others...

I do not sing
to fly on my wings..

I do not cry
to show my despair...

I do not dance
to give you a chance..

I Do all these
to be at ease
to make me
feel pleased.

04/03/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Shah 02 April 2008

In our life most of the times we do things for the sake of others.A good satire on this strange nature of human being.It is the best poem in my eyes because it gives others an ample opportunity to think on their very nature to show others.In this process we loose our happiness and the charme of our personal life.Great Job.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 April 2008

i'm pleased to read your piece....it's a pleasure............

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Vidi Writes 10 May 2008

Everyone has potency inner... You can feel great about What you don't want to be! How much you can feel free! What you can accomplish! And what your potential is! ” A good read. Thank you.

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Rani Turton 02 July 2009

Nice poem whoch seems simple but rings of sincerity.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

But I do read it And don't miss this lovely poem. 10++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 November 2008

'I do not dance to give you a chance' Smile in my eyes :) all together fine eloquence! 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2008

good write, Deepti...selfknowing confident words...good presentation here...10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 November 2008

One of the most appealing poems i read. lines are wonder and thoughts of you are thunder. i want to know more of you as your biography is scace

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