Am A Sun! Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Sun is just being modest....good lines.....

sun is not being modest.. its what its thinking.. there r times when even the greatest feels useless..

dear sun, don't feel so bad. you're the sun and that's enough. And, you do indeed touch the earth with your smiles and warmth that fill our souls. i liked this a lot

nice poem. you are right even the greatest can sometime be overcome with discontent.

From Sun's point of view His agony is not being able to touch the earth From Earth's point of view Without sun it cannot exist at all. There are many such occassions in life Humans enter into such syndrome. There can be resolution points Only When the emotions burst out. We all are here to uplift your morale Sun, you are the life of our life.

both complement to each other. no life possible in absence of any well deserved point 10

sun is mother earth's mother we ca say our granny...the distance yet the sharing between the sun..earth....between the sun and moon is amasing...avery good poem

I am the sun who constantly burns to fill other's life with fun. Good write.

if sun could read he would have given u a ten! ! well penned

The great dilate in original poetryNever been able to touch the earth Keeps smiling from a distance. Am aware – Dear Earth! Will never be able to touch you You are far away From me, can not feel you. lovely gully