I Am A Stream Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

I Am A Stream

Rating: 5.0


I am a stream
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From mountain crest
To my placid surface
I keep on flowing
And in me a drop of rain
Finding its destiny
Ahead I am surging
The woodland vistas amid
I toss with bubbles
Where rocks impede
Yet keep on flowing unyielding
And each travail
Gracefully accommodating
Up and down all around
Plunging in headlong
To satisfy a sea's insatiable greed
A journey from peaks
To the surface placid
Comes not without rhythm and rhyme
Now listen to me
To find where you need to be
In the lap of peace
Get through this creek
Then you will know
How to pursue dreams

Thursday, October 23, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saheb Mohapatra 24 October 2014

AN INTERESTING PRESENTATION OF THE LIFE OF A STREAM.........a stylish poem with mesmerizing lines......enjoyed a lot........ thanks SIR

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Valsa George 24 October 2014

Beautiful poem with great imagery! Enjoyed the course of the stream through woodland vistas and rocky terrains to be finally united with the sea! Enjoyed much and a 10

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Soulful Heart 24 October 2014

superb metaphors.......peace the essential elrment thats misding in todays world...

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Salini Nair 24 October 2014

To find where you need to be In the lap of peace Get through this creek Then you will know How to pursue dreams.....near that shore we glimpse many dreams...................beautiful poem

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 October 2014

Quiet Beautiful lines....... Now listen to me To find where you need to be In the lap of peace Get through this creek Then you will know How to pursue dreams Beautiful flow of stream, very well flowing in beautiful rhythm and rhyme. Beautiful write. Loved reading it.

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