DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK


The Mother - Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

The Mother
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Holy holier-divinely;
Things are with her
As perceived and adorned gracefully
Lots of love and lots of pity
Along she is carrying
Of quintessence motherly
In her exemplified
The feminine persona so lovely
More and more and not less
I see and God confess
She is holier than me
Sent to care your needs
Alleviate your sufferings
Brighten your dreams
Like an Angel in the morning
Seen among lovely flowers
Caressing and them preparing
To see a beautiful day dawning
And the day passed off peacefully
Unto noon and evening
And seen her bidding children
Good-night with words so soothing
Oh mother! what you are
Made of which stuff so rare
For me and for all
You weep your tears
A drop falls on him
Another on her
A dozen on them
A few goes out
To form an ocean
Of love for your children
Unto I would love
Diving deep to die even
For not in vain will go
Your love and affection
My dear my mother
You are, I swear
As good as heaven......




Comments about The Mother by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

  • Gold Star - 27,112 Points Akhtar Jawad (12/9/2014 7:17:00 AM)

    My dear my mother
    You are, I swear
    As good as heaven......
    A nice tribute to mother, a great poem.............10 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (10/8/2014 5:06:00 PM)

    a beautiful tribute to the holy mother your love and affection my dear mother you I swear as good as heaven (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,034 Points Paul Sebastian (9/30/2014 10:24:00 AM)

    A beautiful tribute to a heavenly mother on earth! You have given a beautiful portrait of a saintly loving mother whom you so blessed with. Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,634 Points Salini Nair (7/21/2014 2:33:00 AM)

    no comparison for mothers love as its heavenly.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,788 Points Lyn Paul (6/27/2014 7:24:00 AM)

    Like An Angel in the morning seen among lovely flowers Such beautiful words dedicated to your Mother (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Tanmay Kumar Sankhua (3/3/2014 11:15:00 AM)

    A very well composed poem on dearest mother.......well done................ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,761 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/26/2014 12:12:00 PM)

    It reads even better the second time. Bursting with a beauty that is fitting for one so dear and rear- mother! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,060 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/24/2014 12:36:00 PM)

    Many many thanks........Simon.........I am humbled......... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,761 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/24/2014 12:13:00 PM)

    A tremendous tribute to mothers… powerful perspective…. Keep up the good works Deepak! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,060 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/24/2014 11:07:00 AM)

    Many many thanks........Valsa.........I am humbled......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,060 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/24/2014 11:07:00 AM)

    Many many thanks........Dineshji........I am humbled......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,060 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/24/2014 11:06:00 AM)

    Many many thanks........Geetha.........I am humbled......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,060 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/24/2014 11:05:00 AM)

    Many many thanks........Shraddha.........I am humbled......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Shraddha The Poetess (2/24/2014 10:16:00 AM)

    a truelyyyyyy veryyyyy beautiful poem on maaaaaaaaa..., , loved it
    maaa is the boooooooon.....she is an angel.........well done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/24/2014 6:26:00 AM)

    A Beautiful poem. Nothing can be compared to mothers love. Any pain in her child will pass through her first, before it touches her child...She is the one who Inspires her child. Words are very few to describe mother...I loved reading it.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (2/22/2014 11:51:00 PM)

    To most of the fellow poets here she was/has been a feel,
    To me this mother is someone who could`nt be around me
    And this poem is to be a portrait of a dream mother for all.
    Thank you Deepakji for this sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (2/22/2014 10:22:00 AM)

    A mother is nonpareil.... her love cannot be equated with anyone's else... Unfortunately we do not realize how much she means to us while alive... Now looking back, there is hardly a day when I don't remember my mother.. an embodiment of selfless sacrifice and unconditional love. Before a mother's memory, we can only bow down with great debt of gratitude! Enjoyed much! ! I invite you to read my poem The Drop of a Feather! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (2/22/2014 8:00:00 AM)

    A mother is nonpareil.... her love cannot be equated with anyone's else... Unfortunately we do not realize how much she means to us while alive... Now looking back, there is hardly a day when I don't remember my mother.. an emodiment of selfless sacrifice and uncoditional love. Before a mother's memory, we can only bow down with the weight of gratitude! Enjoyed much! ! I invite you to read my poem The Drop of a Feather! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 22, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, February 24, 2014


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