Horizon Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Horizon

Rating: 5.0


He and she are like
The distant horizon.
It appears as though,
The stooping blue sky
Meets and embraces
The stretching blue sea.

Their colors match,
As they seem to meet silently
Like passionate lovers,
Trying to discover together,
The meanings of life.

As one goes nearer,
The sky begins to move afar!
Love is at its best, when
The beloved is seen from a distance.

Dhaka
03 May 2014
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Friday, May 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 May 2014

so does it seem from distance, masterly imagery!

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Areese Woodson 05 June 2014

This poem reminds me of my shore poem and my wind poem. I love the message you sent and you painted a lovely picture in my mind. Thanks. I gave this poem a 10

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Khairul Ahsan 17 January 2019

Thank you, @Areese Woodson, for reading this poem and relating with some of your own. Much inspired by your generous rating of the poem.

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Amitava Sur 02 June 2014

A lovely description about love between the sky and the sea, very appropriate and I loved it Khairul

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Khairul Ahsan 16 January 2019

Thank you, @Amitava Sur, for reading the poem and leaving an appreciative comment behind. Much inspired.

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Mary Forrester 12 May 2014

Such a lovely poem Khairul.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 January 2019

Thanks a lot for appreciating the poem, @Mary Forrester.

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Susan Lacovara 06 May 2014

Oh my friend Khairul, you have put a sprinkle of magic dust on this beauty of a poem! PEACE

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Khairul Ahsan 16 January 2019

Thank you so much, dear poet Susan Lacovara, for leaving such a nice, poetic and heartening comment on my poem. PEACE to you too!

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Khairul Ahsan 03 May 2014

@Beauteous Victory Thanks for the kind words. These mean a lot to me. You are an inspiration for all the poets of PH. Brave and beautiful. Glad to know you are better now. Stay well, my friend.

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