Hopes Spring Eternal Though... Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Hopes Spring Eternal Though...

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When you appear, in the midst of others,
I keep looking at you,
I like looking at you,
A glow of warmth connects us.

When you still remain while others are gone,
Trepidation begins,
My timid heart palpitates,
At the thought of losing you.

I love to think I love,
I love to think you love,
I fancy our chances, despite knowing,
We are but parallel lines unending!



Dhaka
19 July 2015
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Sunday, July 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to a distant cuckoo...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 10 August 2015

Beautiful lines, beautiful verse. [[We are but parallel lines unending! ]] One verse, a poem in itself The undying power of love.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2020

Dear Sandra, thank you so much for highlighting the last line of the poem. Your generous praise leaves me so much inspired! Grateful! !

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Sandra Feldman 10 August 2015

Beautiful thought and beautiful verse

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2020

Thanks for the kind appreciation, @Sandra Feldman.

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Kirti Sharma 22 July 2015

i liked this line: i keep lookin at you, i like lookin at you nice poem

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Khairul Ahsan 13 May 2020

Thanks, @Kirti Sharma, for liking these lines.

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Kirti Sharma 22 July 2015

i keep lookin at you, i like lookin at you lovely lines! !

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Khairul Ahsan 13 May 2020

Thank you, @Kirti Shama, for quoting lines from my poem that you appreciate. Much inspired.

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