kanav justa

(Shimla)

Hole Hearted


i had a dream
the dream was beautiful
so i shared it with you

i had a heart
the heart was fragile
i gave it to you

you had a dream
the dream must have been beautiful
the dream was never shared

you had a heart
human heart but of stone
mine too frail to stay with you

yet it stayed
but yours went away
and left a hole in my heart

Submitted: Saturday, December 07, 2013

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  • Bronze Star - 6,759 Points Valsa George (1/24/2014 6:24:00 AM)

    How sad Kanava! ! Like a citadel with bullet holes, your heart is left with a hole. Who did that offense to you, after so willingly sharing everything of yours with her? She should be penalised.....! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 16 Points Yasmeen Khan (12/22/2013 12:32:00 AM)

    A heart in love is a fragile heart left with a hole by a the one made of stone, a unique idea. You've nicely presented pun on words! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Kavya . (12/16/2013 1:35:00 AM)

    excellent....the caption of the poemt itself is very catchy! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,555 Points * Sunprincess * (12/8/2013 9:56:00 PM)

    oh kanav, I feel like you have laid your heart on the table for someone
    who was unworthy of your love...I am sorry this has happen to you...
    and I can see from this poem you have a very beautiful heart... of course
    I knew this long ago :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 210 Points Marie Shine (12/8/2013 3:51:00 AM)

    A very poignant write, beautifully expressed. The title is very well chosen: hole instead of whole, very creative! I like this poem very much, it is well crafted and flows as smooth as silk! Thank you for sharing, Kanav. Blessings for a very beautiful Sunday. With every good wish always... (Report) Reply

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