Unwritten Soul


Hold It Last In Heart


Unreachable loves of two
Of highest unreachable sky
Dream to kiss beloved ground
Untold story of two
That touch never be true
Even at the highest mountain
Unreachable for the sky we already knew
In a such beautiful waiting
This love so true
I knew, you do

My last breath
Set a distance of time
Unreachable for our hands
To touch and hold together again
Like the story of earth and the sky
Unreachable to each other
To hold loves be gathered again
But we still hold it last
Everlasting in heart
Our souls bind

Give me smile my dearest one,
Don't let me mourned to see those eyes
That losing its shine because crying on me
A drop of your tears can burn the fire sea
As much it swiped away my calm in me
If love is so true, hold it last
Send me your prayers
So i feel the loves
Indulgence bliss
That will make me alive again
To breathe in this life
From your heart
That heart, of you

Life on earth is with you
Though my heart buried in the sand
As my soul was taken higher above
But forever our loves always stay in you,
For thou made it alive in every second
In your every beating heart, every breath
Our loves will live with you
And me, I'll bring ours high
Bringing to the above
Without any harm
And it will last

My life breathing when you breathe
For you share me the best moments
Beautiful day and night by your sight
Through your eyes, mind and heart
Though i am unreachable
Make me alive
From your heart
Again

Every second and days passed
The gap of our time comes closer
The last met to be everlast meet
But wrong to countdown the end
While the life there for you
Never mourned and pain
Embrace a little time to live
Plant some good deeds for life
Remarks our life evergreen on earth
Let it grows for us proud someday
Together we harvest them from above
Live your life, while hold love last
Each moment we just past
Everlasting past
In every touch

Last word you may not hear
From above i whisper down to you
Something lasting and eternal
Part of us always be in you,
Half with me, here...above
So don't cry my dear
Waste no more tears
Live your life well
Unreachable but touched
So hold it last
Forever

How a while we in past
It will last,
our everlasting love

Submitted: Saturday, April 13, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 04, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

: : : : : : : : : : : : : Dedicated write: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
To one of my good friends, Saadat Tahir. A special friend
that always have share good and bad time with me, his advices
are always appreciated. Such a strong man, you are my friend.
I write this poem to honor your honorable heart.

Last year in March 2012, you lost your two beloved family members in a tragedy...i would not to recall you this, it such hurtful for you

And dear my reader who read this, who ever you are and what you believe in faith, hope you can pray for him and his beloved ones to be calmer, content, loved, stronger. Sat, i will always pray you the best..May God grant me your happiness my dear friend

To have such writing i put myself in a different
state of mind where I imagined as i am the one who passed away
and wish the beloved ones that still alive to keep living good
with no mourning on me...because true loves for people always like that..we wish the best for them...so i am sure This is what your two members telling you...Hold it last in heart, as the love is eternal...someday you will return to the higher place and so dont cry my dear friends, in your heart you always has something...that you need to believe there is something. Take care my fella_Unwritten Soul
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  • Spiritual Seeker (4/28/2013 1:06:00 AM)

    My heart feels like stopping reading this beautiful poem....I am reminded again of my parents love, though they had passed away....a true masterpiece Soul. A great 10. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Danny Draper (4/25/2013 2:42:00 AM)

    A sustained and descriptive writing of passion and compassion in love and enduring friendship. (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (4/22/2013 7:50:00 PM)

    Eight sections
    1. Pure love soaring above the reproachable earth. Pure in ways
    of only known heartwise. I AM LEAVING , I AM LEAVING, BIT THE LOVE REMAINS.

    2.Binding souls, as the sky holds and embraces the earth. Together forever but can never
    be the same but that stops not the love.

    3.The, Tears can burn the fire sea of the death gate cycle.

    4.As earthly realm demises love defies the buried heart in sand and
    soars ever higher and brighter in purest form.

    5.Beautiful day and night ... in pure balance, beating hearts as one.

    6.Remarks our life evergreen on earth, the garden of Eden remade in your image
    Leave the legacy of love, true love as a memorial not to death but to life.

    7.Above I whisper down to you, silent soft words that can only be heard in the heart.
    Calming reasuring words of future connection and eternal embraces.

    8.Dedication to pure love. (Report) Reply

  • Anthony Di''anno (4/18/2013 8:24:00 AM)

    Such an outpouring of compassion, humility and love. I wish Saadat strength and warm kindness. You are a beautiful soul Soul, who warms every other soul as you pass through the rooms and corridoors of poemhunter. Always around. Always scattering the seeds of love. A beautiful spirit haunting our hearts. (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas (4/17/2013 5:21:00 AM)

    your poem reflects too much sadnes, you used a great way to show your sympathy for our great poet Sat..
    no one can healed his wound, but hope so your poem would make him realize that his loved two always remain with them, may be your poem minimize his cry...lovely tribute (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (4/15/2013 2:35:00 PM)

    A big heart my friend that shares love for all of us. Like Thomas said, below, you can not hid or denied your talent. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (4/14/2013 2:39:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem Soul such sadness. In the past I too have lost someone who meant a great deal to me but you will always keep them alive in you heart with rememberances of them. Great write BB : O) (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (4/14/2013 8:49:00 AM)

    Unwritten Soul unleashed...!
    This poem proves your talent you so desparately try to hide.
    I only hope you accept the praise you deserve... but I know you won't. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (4/13/2013 5:32:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem Soul, a lovely gift for Saadat - I am sure he will appreciate it. I am so sorry to learn of his tragic loss and my thoughts go out to him. (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (4/13/2013 10:38:00 AM)

    the poem transfered me sadness.and i am about to cry.hahaha.
    All of us has lost some one.some one who was so lovable to us.but life goes on and doesnt stop for no body.
    although noboy has seen heaven and hell but its kind of relief to say some day we will be together.
    brilliant way you have shown your sympathy.
    peace be upon their soul under the banner of the heaven.
    ~nb (Report) Reply

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