His Absence Poem by Broken heart emo

His Absence

Rating: 3.8


She walks in the forest
Alone this time
In a beautiful white dress
It sways as she walks
Stepping on wet grass
Crushing them with her gentle steps
She keeps walking with no destination
Or is there?
The place where they first met
Even though he's not there anymore
His presence still lingers in the air
Kissing her bare skin
She can feel it
She misses him
Still she manages to smile
It's a sad smile
She smiles as the memory plays before her eyes
Was he a dream or was he real?
The question still unanswered.
But there is one thing she knows
Forgetting him is more than impossible
Forgetting him would require her heart being ripped out and her memory being erased
But still she wont be able to forget his voice which still echoes in her ears
His smile that still flashes before her eyes
His absence which still haunts her every single second
Leaving an emptiness inside her

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bradley Flowers 23 October 2011

I gave you an eight on this, It's lacking something and i'm not good at explaining those things.. Good poem so keep it up. Just work on writing a connection of words. The flow to me was a little off.

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Blessing Ekpe 20 October 2011

sad, sad lines, captivating

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Dead Leaf 19 October 2011

nice to read......sweet and emotional

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Vipins Puthooran 16 October 2011

It's a nice one, , , emotional poem..

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