Broken Heart Poem by Broken heart emo

Broken Heart

Rating: 4.3


You were the best thing in my life!
I never thought i could be so lucky to have you
You were the first to make me smile
And laugh so hard....
And give me such a beautiful card
You were the only person i truely trusted
I gave you all my love
You were all that mattered to me...
I couldnt live without you for even one single moment
But as time changed...
We started to drift apart!
Our thoughts changed
Our hobbies changed...
There was nothing left common between us...
We started to meet less and less
You stopped taking my calls...
You started to ignore me more and more..
I didnt know what happened with u
Or was the problem wid me? ?
I started crying all alone in the dark..
I went to a walk in the park..
There...
What i say...
Shattered my heart in to pieces
Shredded me into tears....
I couldnt believe my eyes for a moment! !
I was wishing it was just a dream..
But it wasnt..
It was reality.....
What i saw was....
My love was out with another girl....
He cheated on me....
I couldnt believe it.....
I ran home crying...
Wishing this would of never happened...
Next day....
Next day....
He broke up with me....
Shattered again..
What could i do....
I knew why...
So i just kept queit...
He left...
The first person i loved left me...
The first person i trusted left me...
He left me....
Oh why did he leave me?
I will keep loving him...
Because i cant love anyone else! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i'm so sorry from the bottom of my shattered excuse of a heart. i know what it feels like to be rejected and forgotten. it's a very beautiful poem full or the pain you're trying to release. i hope things become better for you.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 July 2009

awwww! so much love! ! ! sad penned beautifully! 10+

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 July 2009

I love the words flow..........like a river of emotion.Good stuff dear.

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Lynn Glover 24 July 2009

A really good poem. I give you a 10. Lynn

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Soulless Angel 26 July 2009

amazing poem.....keep it up! ..

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Aloys Rugazia 30 July 2012

gud.........................................................!

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Romeo Della Valle 01 August 2011

I learned also the hard and painful ways how to survive and move on. Like I said in my poem titled: IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, ' where there is an ending, there is a new beginning and what I thought was a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the sky'.... Also, please check: A BROKEN HEART and you will see that you are not the only one going through this painful situation! A well penned and poignant write! Keep it up! 19+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Bose Perumal 30 September 2010

oh! broken heart emo, why do we always write the, first person pronoun, 'I' always in capital letters. As long as you live this world exists.so only do we write like that. in spite i feel sad about an innocent heart being broken. feelings and passions are mighty. True. But, are they not our own. I believe though it is hard yet it can be consoled and pacified. Truest love tells not tales, nor tarry nor fancy. It is a blessed burden light as well heavy. There the truest love must match in life.Life is a complete poem. love is a stanza and yet the best of all. it is the climax. Even then life is incomplete without it. but we cannot dissipate life with it. love can effloresence in the form of kindness, mercy, pity and what not. please do try to be a bold 'I'. one cannot draw a picture without a background. our body and life is the background. What cannot be cured has to be endured. Take heart dear baby.

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Dickson Mseti 25 April 2010

It's a painful reality to experience.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 28 February 2010

Wonderful and beautiful instead of the sadness. I liked it. Spread your wings and soar far away You'll forget those hurts day by day Life is a journey - experiences of cheer and gloom Don't be pessimist they'll come the days of bloom -SMILE-

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