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Broken Heart


You were the best thing in my life!
I never thought i could be so lucky to have you
You were the first to make me smile
And laugh so hard....
And give me such a beautiful card
You were the only person i truely trusted
I gave you all my love
You were all that mattered to me...
I couldnt live without you for even one single moment
But as time changed...
We started to drift apart!
Our thoughts changed
Our hobbies changed...
There was nothing left common between us...
We started to meet less and less
You stopped taking my calls...
You started to ignore me more and more..
I didnt know what happened with u
Or was the problem wid me? ?
I started crying all alone in the dark..
I went to a walk in the park..
There...
What i say...
Shattered my heart in to pieces
Shredded me into tears....
I couldnt believe my eyes for a moment! !
I was wishing it was just a dream..
But it wasnt..
It was reality.....
What i saw was....
My love was out with another girl....
He cheated on me....
I couldnt believe it.....
I ran home crying...
Wishing this would of never happened...
Next day....
Next day....
He broke up with me....
Shattered again..
What could i do....
I knew why...
So i just kept queit...
He left...
The first person i loved left me...
The first person i trusted left me...
He left me....
Oh why did he leave me?
I will keep loving him...
Because i cant love anyone else! !

Submitted: Sunday, July 19, 2009
Edited: Friday, May 13, 2011

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  • Romeo Della Valle (8/1/2011 7:10:00 PM)

    I learned also the hard and painful ways how to survive and move on. Like I said in my poem titled: IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, ' where there is an ending, there is a new beginning and what I thought was a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the sky'.... Also, please check: A BROKEN HEART and you will see that you are not the only one going through this painful situation! A well penned and poignant write! Keep it up! 19+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

  • Bose Perumal (9/30/2010 5:09:00 AM)

    oh! broken heart emo, why do we always write the, first person pronoun, 'I' always in capital letters. As long as you live this world exists.so only do we write like that. in spite i feel sad about an innocent heart being broken. feelings and passions are mighty. True. But, are they not our own. I believe though it is hard yet it can be consoled and pacified. Truest love tells not tales, nor tarry nor fancy. It is a blessed burden light as well heavy. There the truest love must match in life.Life is a complete poem. love is a stanza and yet the best of all. it is the climax. Even then life is incomplete without it. but we cannot dissipate life with it. love can effloresence in the form of kindness, mercy, pity and what not. please do try to be a bold 'I'. one cannot draw a picture without a background. our body and life is the background. What cannot be cured has to be endured. Take heart dear baby. (Report) Reply

  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (2/28/2010 5:30:00 AM)

    Wonderful and beautiful instead of the sadness. I liked it.

    Spread your wings and soar far away
    You'll forget those hurts day by day
    Life is a journey - experiences of cheer and gloom
    Don't be pessimist they'll come the days of bloom

    -SMILE- (Report) Reply

  • Deborah Cromer (7/31/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    This is powerful and sad. Seeing two together is hard. It is a good thing though, because you have an answer to part of the situation. You can go on from there. Having answers is hard sometimes, but we need to know. We cannot let go and move on without knowing the truth. Good, clear write of what is real. DC (Report) Reply

  • Afzal Shauq (7/31/2009 1:02:00 PM)

    But it wasnt..
    It was reality.....
    What i saw was....
    My love was out with another girl....
    He cheated on me....
    I couldnt believe it.....
    I ran home crying...
    Wishing this would of never happened...

    what a story type poem is this one..broken you and broken heart this poem.. it seems your story and they ay you wrote is impressive and heart catcy one.. enjoyed it a lot..well done..keen on wriitng..10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Black Rose . (7/26/2009 3:09:00 PM)

    I'm truely sorry for the darkness that has been placed on u.
    I'm here if u need anything.
    Well anything i can do over a computer lol
    Lots of love to the one who cries bloody tears in the night.

    xoxoxxxxx Black Rose (Report) Reply

  • ~Heart of Ice~ ¢♦ ¢♦ ¢ (7/22/2009 11:53:00 PM)

    i'm so sorry from the bottom of my shattered excuse of a heart. i know what it feels like to be rejected and forgotten. it's a very beautiful poem full or the pain you're trying to release. i hope things become better for you. (Report) Reply

  • Mary Joy Lumanog (7/22/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    Hahaha..that what happened to me..with my first love..hahaha. what else can I say..you trusted the first person you love..the first person person you loved..well...the first person could also break your heart indeed..but funny thing is..if your love left you for your bff..hahaha.funny isn't it? well.. i like this..10/10. go emo! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Afzal Shauq (7/21/2009 5:27:00 AM)

    what a sweet romatinic and full for heartiest love poem...means you are in love with some one, who stays inside you and you consider him your own and yes he is your own, , , best of luck..10/10 (Report) Reply

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