Happy Feast Poem by Abdallah Gamal

Happy Feast

Rating: 5.0


</></></></>It's a day not like any day
where everyone dances and plays
where enemies meet in the same way
that they were fighting in it yesterday
but today is not like any day
where we kneel for our creator and pray
for saving us and keep us on the right way.
because today is not like any day
we laugh, we love, we sing, we try
to make our dreams touch the sky
and jumping up very very high
to make every miserable person be happy, no pain, no cry
but unfortunately today is like any day
it comes at night, to see us off and says goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bella Hernandez 03 November 2011

beautiful rhyming and beautiful to express today keep it up plz Abdallah ~Bella

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Romeo Della Valle 03 November 2011

Wow! Powerful and melodic with that beautiful and well coordinated rhymes! 10+++Definitely, there is one reason why you are on the top: talent! I admire you and your clear ability to create amazing poems! Thank you for sharing! It is a great pleasure to read and enjoy your great words! God Bless You for always and keep it up! Love and Peace for always, Romeo from New York City! ...

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Crimson Love 04 November 2011

This poem is incredible, It flows quite nicley, I enjoyed it! : D

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Great! lovely work there fellow brother nice piece

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Dayerlin Baez 13 November 2011

Oh gosh, your poems touches my soul, I've never read anything like it, it's amazing :)

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Unwritten Soul 12 November 2011

A firework splashing the shine...that how your spirit here, it exploding a nicest words and i love the lines you shared Abdallah, very nice heart you shared here :) Keep writing..this is very cool remedy for hot days :) _Unwritten Soul

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Liliana Roman 07 November 2011

awesomeness! ! it reminds me that there will be wonderful days but those days will have to end. but it also reminds me that thosde wonderful days will come again and again! !

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Katelin Offord Harper 04 November 2011

beautiful it is fantastic

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