Everyone Wanna Be The Best, But He/She Can'T Even Try At Least Poem by Abdallah Gamal
Everyone Wanna Be The Best, But He/She Can'T Even Try At Least
I wanna be a good person, so everyone will love me,
so my dad says that's my son, so everyone will point at me,
saying: 'He's the bright moon, he has the perfect beauty,
he has the eyes of the sun, who is that angel could be.'.
I wanna be good, just for the people say he's a good person.
However if that all I wanted, so what's the point of what I've done? !
So all of that wasn't faithfully to Allah, and at last I haven't won
The Medal Of Honour, so everything I dreamt about has gone.
No, not everything has gone, I still have Allah in my life.
I've just woke up, and I'm coming to continue my strife.
My vision has returned to me, so nothing will change my belief even the knife.
I don't care anymore about getting a new car or a perfect wife.
All what I care about is to put the Heaven on my way, and forget the prelife.
Now I feel the faith in me, I feel that mercy of Allah upon me is rife.
I'm not religious, but I think you're right in the fact that people who do good things shouldn't do them to look good and feel proud; they should do them simply because they are good and right. People who do 'good' things to look good aren't truly good at all, they are show-offs.
this poem can apparently highlight your strong mind and religious creed! Wonderful pen! !
Abdallah, you are an excellent writer. You have the gift of expression. your outlook on life is great, and always persue your dreams. You goodness will be richly rewarded someday in heaven. The heart of the poet has spoken. Keep writing and expressing yourself. happiness forver Heather Burns
A beautiful poem, keep on believing in y our Lord don't let no one stand in the way of what you believe is right. In the end all that we have require on earth will surly stay on earth. But are faith no matter how or were we go will remain ours and no one can change what is meant to be! I have one comment I wouldn't give up finding that perfect wife, they say the women is the backbone of a strong man. May Mercy be on our side
i liked this sufist honest feelings. philosophy of companion only with Allah..great work
am speechless! just keep on writting and i will keep on reading
I love how you put your beliefs in your writing and your not afraid of what others think about it.... I like this poem a lot=)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The best shine is when it comes from heart, do best not because of complement but it surely make u calm and happy when you do it sincerely....and I know your eyes is round like moon shape..to share the warm light to who want to see...in this poem you inspire us a lot, a worth to wait poem...a hope in hopelessness, a gem among the sands..keep it up _Unwritten Soul