Haiku 969 Poem by Belle Wassermeister

Haiku 969

Rating: 5.0


frost covers the tree
on a bent and frozen limb
a chickadee sings

Haiku 969
Tuesday, November 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,life,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 28 March 2021

A handsome or pretty write depending on the leanings of that precious little chick. Always pays to go out on a limb, just tread those words carefully. Great picture to boot or hoot! Wait that's an owl haiku! Just needs a new number or two!

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Susan Williams 10 November 2020

on a bent and frozen limb- - perfectly chosen words to paint an indelible picture in the readers' minds- - - - - - - - - - - -top marks. Linda Bella

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Kim Barney 10 November 2020

Beautiful haiku, Belle! I love black-capped chickadees. There are many of them where I live.

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Sandra Feldman 10 November 2020

Haiku 969 and 970 Thank you for these two great Haikus that bring us the beauty and peace of Nature in these much troubled times. Soothing and lovely in their well felt simplicity.

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Sandra Feldman 10 November 2020

Haiku 969 and 970 These 2 lovely Haikus bring Nature's peace, simplicity, innocence and beauty to our trouble spirits, in an insane World. Truly lovely. Thank you

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Belle Wassermeister

Belle Wassermeister

Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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