ramesh rai

Gold Star - 11,841 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

HAIKU # 1


Worth living is life
when the night flower bloom
moon is hidden within
the breast of cloud

Submitted: Sunday, September 08, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 09, 2013

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Comments about this poem (HAIKU # 1 by ramesh rai )

  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (11/1/2013 10:21:00 AM)

    moon must shine to brighten the soul of the living! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,075 Points Unwritten Soul (9/9/2013 11:11:00 AM)

    Dont hide dont hide moon, let out to be clear in the zone of night chest! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan (9/8/2013 1:22:00 PM)

    Interesting composition. But the format is NOT that of haiku! Haiku has three lines, usually with a 5-7-5 syllable scheme. Haiku is the most difficult format of poetry to master (I myself am not good at haiku) . Haiku is a form of meditation, which requires years of practice for perfection. Each of the three lines should evoke a distinct image connected through a very subtle thread.... With devotion and practice, the above poem can be converted to a nice haiku. Good effort. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/8/2013 12:40:00 PM)

    Beautiful Haiku.LIfe is worth living.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,761 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/8/2013 7:33:00 AM)

    Life is worth living. Beautiful haiku. (Report) Reply

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