Greiving Suicide (Short Story) Poem by Monica Rose

Greiving Suicide (Short Story)

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A friend that was a lover of mine was having trouble and never told anyone. All I knew is he used to cut, but I got him to stop for a short period of time...It was late summer, and one of his friends died, and I couldn't really do anything about it. It was a Friday, and he pulled the trigger to his heart. I called the police they came and didn't really do anything besides confirm he was dead and ask me a few questions. I was extremely upset, crying and trying to calm myself down. Later in the week we had a funeral and I kissed my finger tips and touched his soft; lifeless; pale lips. I stayed there until they closed the casket and cried my eyes out. That was the last time I saw my true love. The note said he loved me and he just couldn't take the pain any longer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allan O 07 November 2009

very sad read...you put your words and feeling in simply perfect...loss is possibly one of the hardest things to write about..and even harder when it is about one you knew...thanks for the chance to see inside your mind and feel your feelings....~^..^

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Steven Aragon 05 November 2009

That's has to be one of the hardest things in life to witness. I have yet to feel a pain of such magnitude. Amazingly written.

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Dylan Oppedahl 04 November 2009

My heart stopped at the part when you say he killed himself

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