God Please Give Me A Break Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

God Please Give Me A Break

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God please give me a break
No more pain no mistake.
God please give me solace
No more pain no bad days.

God please give more knowledge
No more pain no disgrace.
God please guide me always
No more pain no darkness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Efe Benjamin 17 October 2011

Short but concise, truely it is only in God we can find this perfect peace and rest.

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Hazel Durham 14 October 2012

A heartfelt plea to God to give you peace, great write!

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Tulip Julio Tulipan 13 October 2012

Perfect poem! I love it!

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Heyyou Boy 16 January 2012

A very good poem Asif. Well done

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Jacqui Broad 19 October 2011

I talk constantly to God, but never once thought to ask Him that. Give me a break. Lovely prayer, and lovely poetry. Stay well.

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Jyothsnaphanija Bolla 18 October 2011

No more pain and Darkness, its so simple, stright, extremely appealing poem.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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