God Cries Poem by T.James Becker

God Cries

Rating: 5.0


Soldiers
Search for cover
Enemy sites target
Clusters of hell fall from the sky
Death bombs

A plume
Of smoke rises
High into the night sky
A ball of fire explodes upward
Hells fire

Heat sears
Smoke chokes the lungs
Eyes blinded and burning
Ash falling like burning snow flakes
Screams sound

Burnt flesh
The smell of death
Wounded cry out in pain
Rescue starts, the living tended
Dead left

Complete
Devastation
As Man and nature lost
Encouraged by greed and power
God cries
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Cinq-Cinquain form
5 lines, group of 5
syllables count 2-4-6-8-2

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 13 August 2012

A brilliant piece, with the undertone of an emphatic ending. Love this. Thanks.

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Linda Winchell 20 October 2008

Great wording. Felt the bombs and the passion of each word. Linda

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Ershad Mazumder 06 October 2008

I am in conflict with my God. I shall set fire on his throne. I want to see him weeping with his angels. Excellant dear james. more than 10 for you.

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T.James Becker

T.James Becker

Prescott Arizona
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