Garden Of Change Poem by T.James Becker

Garden Of Change

Rating: 5.0


Race
Color
Religion
Difference’s
Discrimination
Stimulate weeds of hate
Roots of anger buried deep
Destruction annihilation
Hide the beauty of the similes
Traverse takeover of humanity


Plant seeds of understanding and kindness
Fertilize friendships: hate soon subsides
Ugly weeds of racism die
Differences are embraced
Similarity
Understanding
Alliance
Friendship
Love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 17 November 2008

Could not have said it better my friend shout it out 10++++ Chris

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Marilyn Lott 04 January 2009

Amen, TJ! A powerful message that you have sent and needs to be heard by the world. Great job! A '10! ' for sure! Keep writing and sharing with us. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Vanish Windows 26 November 2008

I really like the balance you 've achieve, in content, and visual and aural form, in this poem. (I gave you a 10)

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<font color =fusha>Amy 22 November 2008

this was amazing you can tell you woked hard on this keep writing :)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 November 2008

Well Said T.J. So lets all plant some love... Andrew 10

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Tom Balch 17 November 2008

A very well crafted piece indeed, great read.10/10 regards Tom

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T.James Becker

T.James Becker

Prescott Arizona
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