Neela Nath


.........Funny Song.........


If you meet me.
You won't love dear,
I have a stick,
which may arise fear.
I'm at the threshold
where B.P remains high.
for untimely excitement,
anytime I may die.
Your blood is young,
Your heart is fresh,
if you touch me
you will make a mess.
My body is tattered,
full of patchwork.
Love has jumped out,
from my old old bark.
Don't meet me,
Don't say word amorous,
At this point of life,
this is sheer farce!

Submitted: Saturday, April 19, 2014
Edited: Saturday, April 19, 2014

Topic of this poem: love


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  • Veteran Poet - 1,625 Points Herbert Guitang (4/27/2014 10:25:00 AM)

    Very inspiring and interesting to read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Tanya Gupta (4/24/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    hah..hah..hah..
    what a lovely write, enjoyed a lot.

    please come and read my poems and gve me your veiws (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,252 Points Sekharan Pookkat (4/23/2014 8:52:00 AM)

    Your body may be old
    but your thoughts are young and inspiring (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (4/21/2014 4:55:00 AM)

    Thomas, thanks for picking up the humor of this write! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (4/21/2014 1:00:00 AM)

    As full of fallacy as a smiling union carbide executive in India.
    Your as young as every sunrise is old. And you have all day and night to prove it.
    Take away the mirrors and no one knows how old they are... or young. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (4/19/2014 9:17:00 PM)

    Ha ha F.B.Thanks for your advice! Amazing prompt poem from a promising poet's pen. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,211 Points Mr. Nobody (4/19/2014 8:53:00 PM)

    You are a silly young nature watcher
    Drive to the bar,
    get a man
    and be a debaucher!

    Make that tired blood
    turn into brandy,
    might buy you 20 yrs,
    could be real handy! (Report) Reply

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