Neela Nath Das


..........______________________ - Poem by Neela Nath Das

I
Will melt
in the
air
as water
evaporates
under the
ray of the
ball of fire.
I'm now
ice.....
Tomorrow
may turn
to water..
The day after- - - - -
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Comments about ..........______________________ by Neela Nath Das

  • Gold Star - 21,531 Points * Sunprincess * (10/31/2013 2:11:00 PM)

    wow very unique, the title captured my attention...cool poem :) (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 916 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (5/11/2013 6:47:00 AM)

    The day after you'll again melt into the air? (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,282 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (5/8/2013 6:38:00 PM)

    So dismal Hari. You are ice now, as hard unforseen circumstances has frozen your soul.
    Now under the broiling sun your will melts and you lose form and become puddles of melted water.
    The puddles heat and you lose all desire and evaporate into nothing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/5/2013 10:43:00 PM)

    evaporate to unknown destiny known to all beautiful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013


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