Forever Love Poem by louis rams

Forever Love

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I will love you when you're old and grey
I will love you night and day
I will love you through good times and bad

I will love you when you're happy or sad
I will love you when your health fails
I will love you when I have to wipe your tail
I will love you cause GOD meant it to be
I will love you through eternity
Everything gets old and withers and dies
But He has our home up in his heavenly sky
Keep that breathtaking smile on your face
For we are going to a better place
There will be no sorrows, aches or pains
And where everyone is the same
For joy and happiness will follow us
For in our GOD we put our trust.
SMILE
© L. RAMS 022120

Friday, February 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 17 July 2020

2) All you wrote here are one per one The Truth, as God means it to be. A precious gem is this poem. Congratulations. I am happy to meet another poet who has such strong belief in the Lord. Well captured poem based upon God's love as we are taught to. as The Bible says. I am touched very much, dear Louis. God's Blessings in Abundance for thee.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 July 2020

Absoklutely, dear Louis, in our God we put our trust. Amen. A loveliest poem I came across today. This gem no one has discovered/commented, only poetess Practicing Poetess and I. Your beautiful words I cite here: Everything gets old and withers and dies But He has our home up in his heavenly sky. This should be the POD, Louis! Sure one day.

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Practicing Poetess 25 February 2020

A very sweet poem that captures the essence of what true and abiding love REALLY is! This poem should be read by many! : -)

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