Jayachandran Chakrapany


Forever - Poem by Jayachandran Chakrapany

Oh time
You walk always
In front of me
In your crawling shadow
You hide me somewhere
Perhaps you could hide me
Here forever
But beware
I may break your shadow
And fly to eternity.


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poem on life

Comments about Forever by Jayachandran Chakrapany

  • Veteran Poet - 1,282 Points Nika Mcguin (3/5/2014 5:54:00 PM)

    Tiny, but power packed! I love this, the idea of never being satisfied - not even with forever. That is human nature for sure, blessed with forever but still seeking eternity lol. A captivating write! ^^

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  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/29/2014 8:59:00 AM)

    A poem with great message. Very true said I may break your shadow and fly to eternity. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,384 Points Valsa George (1/14/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    Short and burdened with meaning! Enjoyed this great write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,838 Points Tiku . (1/13/2014 11:25:00 AM)

    ending in a positive note it flows smooth.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,848 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/12/2014 10:19:00 PM)

    wonderful piece.........Jayachandran..........I love your poems.........please read my poems at your leisure........ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Mary Amrutha (1/12/2014 2:07:00 AM)

    i love this piece of poem... simple and beautiful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 14, 2014


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