Jayachandran Chakrapany


Forever


Oh time
You walk always
In front of me
In your crawling shadow
You hide me somewhere
Perhaps you could hide me
Here forever
But beware
I may break your shadow
And fly to eternity.

Submitted: Thursday, January 09, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, January 14, 2014

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poem on life

Comments about this poem (Forever by Jayachandran Chakrapany )

  • Rookie - 853 Points Nika Mcguin (3/5/2014 5:54:00 PM)

    Tiny, but power packed! I love this, the idea of never being satisfied - not even with forever. That is human nature for sure, blessed with forever but still seeking eternity lol. A captivating write! ^^

    ~Nika (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/29/2014 8:59:00 AM)

    A poem with great message. Very true said I may break your shadow and fly to eternity. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (1/14/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    Short and burdened with meaning! Enjoyed this great write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,032 Points Tiku . (1/13/2014 11:25:00 AM)

    ending in a positive note it flows smooth.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,255 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/12/2014 10:19:00 PM)

    wonderful piece.........Jayachandran..........I love your poems.........please read my poems at your leisure........ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Mary Amrutha (1/12/2014 2:07:00 AM)

    i love this piece of poem... simple and beautiful (Report) Reply

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