For Walter Poem by Susy Evelyne

For Walter

Rating: 4.5


It takes courage to greet a stranger
And seem to fail.
To smile day in, day out,
Year in, year out -
All to no avail.
Yet smile you did, Walter;
Smile each morning
As you trod the commuter trail.
And wish him good day!
But wordlessly the man would pass
On his way.

So it went on: week in, week out,
Year in, year out,
Your 'Good morning' was spurned.
Countless smiles lavished
And not the merest
Of acknowledgements ever earned.
Until one day - one glorious day -
The ice thawed and cracked;
The smile was returned!

Some things in life are hard to explain.
Such as why in the desert comes the rain,
And why thereafter each day
A greeting from that stranger came.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written 2006
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I think it is a love affair and it is nice to read.

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Lawerence Mize 27 January 2014

Knew a guy like the one you describe in your poem. Enjoyed this one.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 December 2013

''Some things in life are hard to explain. Such as why in the desert comes the rain, And why thereafter each day A greeting from that stranger came.' Liked these lines.

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John Brown 24 October 2013

It's the English way you know: Don't get too friendly too soon. He was a tough nut to crack though.

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