For The First Time In Forever Poem by Abdulkarim Modiya

For The First Time In Forever

Rating: 3.8


For the first time in Forever
Let's create a moment to stay together
Let's sail against any stormy weather
To create our own new generation agenda

For the first time in forever, let's feel
The joy within us and lets it be reveal
Let's our sad moment be forever seal
And let riches and wealth be our daily meal
For the first in forever in you
Let's our love make it to its fullest full
Let's join hands to make our life meaningful
And make me hypnotized cause you are the most beautiful

For the first time in forever in me
You took me beyond what I can see

Wednesday, April 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 01 May 2017

Forever seal! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Amrar Anna 01 May 2017

For the first time in Forever Let's create a moment to stay together Let's sail against any stormy weather To create our own new generation agenda excellent written

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Tom Allport 01 May 2017

a poem of all peoples living together in harmony? is it a pipe dream or could it come about? any thoughts? ..............wonderfully written.

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Lantz Pierre 01 May 2017

All peoples, you suggest. Hmm. I admit I got lost by the grammar, but I read it as just being about a couple.

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 May 2017

An optimistic start. Thanks

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 May 2017

A poem full of love and sweet dream. Hope you to get your lover soon. Thanks for sharing and Congrats.

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A very hopeful and positive poem very nice idea.. a ten and congratulations on be selected poet of the day..

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Wild Flower 01 May 2017

Good but not so good. I see some grammatical mistakes here..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 May 2017

The joy within us.... such a lovely poem.... congrats on being chosen.... a highest 10....

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