For Introspection Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

For Introspection

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No time for introspection
To review own action
In relation to neighborhood
And how it is to be understood

Love makes us happy
That is known already
But it must start from near by
Where by we can easily try

If there is peace at home
You will always feel fine and welcome
But if you are distressed in family
You will always be acting silly

Seek advice from within
You will score easy win
The soul will act pure
The future path will be assured

If you can spare little time
And think over past time
It may provide some clue
As insight can be had with few

It is right time to sit
And feel good to fit
In any circumstances
When something as chance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

No time for introspection To review own action

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Yes. Javier Pino Casas8 hours ago Nice vocabulary. Comment +1 Very Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Dhirendra Kumar Panda8 hours ago Nicely expressed. Like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Nizar Alsaleh8 hours ago Good One! I like it and I love your style Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Too many underlying themes Ebony Meyers8 hours ago I loved all the themes that were touched upon. I do, however feel like there were too many similar themes simultaneously. I am however, no poet or scholar, so please do not be offended by my opinion which is of course purely mine. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago you have right of expression. feel free to guide me. welcome

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Nice poem.. 12 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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