For I Am In Love With Death... Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

For I Am In Love With Death...

Rating: 5.0


For I am in love with death,
With tears swelling eyes,
With no essence of such human faith,
And no time to state those; lies.

With sun's endurance from tiny rainfall,
Shall meet me death with eyes asleep,
With rhetoric in tone and the echo-less calls,
And bending tears when approaches we keep.

In love with strange someone,
Shall never my mistakes, I confess,
With dark dawns, I surely not be a man,
But with a live hope of help to access.

While in love with death, I shall ever be unknown,
And on earth none shall adore, none shall mourn.

Wednesday, November 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: DEATH
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 05 November 2014

beautiful write, sad though.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 November 2014

Nice poem but Saheb why can't you drag concluding a positive that will be nicer

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Neela Nath Das 05 November 2014

A profound poem on death.Saheb, Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 05 November 2014

It is not yet time for you to fall in love with death Saheb.... Instead fall in love with life! A poignant write!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 October 2015

Verily, death is uncertain which takes the soul to eternity Loved reading it......10

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Dinesan Madathil 08 November 2014

An excellent poem that spins on the orbit of a mysterious element! Love for death at times allures us and as Valsa Madam says I don`t think death is something to be desired for once we are septuagenarians or octogenarians alone..... The mission is one - living a vibrant life however short it is.. Let us however live for many more years for others and to write about life and death like this, ha, ha, ha... I give 10 marks for this unique write.

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Salini Nair 06 November 2014

beautiful poem....but be in a positive state......................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2014

No doubt death is a truth. Many fear about this. But at a particular time we should love this while comes automatically not as so early. Death is a reality but you should not think of it now. Your poem speaks about truth and awakes all knocking their doors. Excellent writing and fearlessness towards death.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 November 2014

Very poignant write with wonderful words.........keep writing......top marks

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