Flower may open
Friday,25th January 2019
Yes, I was slowly gaining the ground
the poetry was getting familiar and the place was found
I was going deep and deep
friends also insisted me to keep latest
you then become an addict
with your noble acts
you try to venture humanitarian ground
where there is a lot more to be found
poetry is such an ocean
where the deepness is never seen
you go deeper and deeper
that shall always offer
the literary flower may open petals slowly
until you gain the experience steadily
the readers cooperate enthusiastically
so you build up the confidence gradually
This is how I gained the foothold
many readers told it bluntly
and pointed out my flaws
so I was able to draw the conclusion
Hasmukh Mehta
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This is how I gained the foothold many readers told it bluntly and pointed out my flaws so I was able to draw the conclusion Hasmukh Mehta