Five Liners.15. Waltz Poem by Valsa George

An amazing five liner I really liked all the five lines but if one asks me to choose a single line I shall choose the following line: - Though our feet are not laid on carpeted floor

concise bliss of two souls blended in fusion of eternal love......waltzing to the music of pain and happiness, poor in materaial wealth but exquisitely rich in the essential ingredient of feelings

Show must go on with cheers or without cheers for predestined is life for the chosen pair to the eternal waltz..... Valsa.......touching and very philosophical......great write

short but rich in content. Whether there are people to applaud or not, keep on the show. I also like the idea of the tied feet. Good job!

So nicely it is written here. Once when two minds are in unison, there needs no carpet or audience, still they can dance around throughout the night.

An eternally blissful waltz of soul mates! Exquisite!

Waltz is beautiful group dance where sing and dance go together in timeless rhythm. When unison raises male and female with their pair of feet dance in absence of cheering crowd too. Nice presentation. Thanks.

True union of minds and the most graceful steps made by the feet of the duo in togetherness! Here is a five liner dancing into the minds....

A couple feeling eternal togetherness in performing waltz of life together. beautiful five liner.

The need of every human soul...such connection, to last forever. A sweet and tender poem. Love it!