It was not only soul’s meet
But with warm greetings too
We met and exchanged glance
I saw in it a golden chance
You were shying
And staying
On floor
With open door
I entered
As winds ushered me in
You were like heaven’s beauty
Only made for me by an almighty
How long shall I remain thirsty?
And get pictures daily
Now you are just before me
Inviting and relaxing totally free
I imagine sweet encounter
As you are ready to cater
Our final wish together
I simply surrender and offer
Commendable work... Your last 2 stanzas are strong and eloquently express passion and romance in equivalence to the majestic beauty of the image of the Rose you posted below your poem...Try and be more cognizant of prepositions, and certain nouns that require the use of the preposition ''THE preceding it...///// IE: ' '''And staying On floor', really should read 'Staying on 'THE' floor'. And, if I could be so bold to further suggest that...''Lying on the floor' might even make your effort shine brighter...however, that's your call, not mine...Just an IMO, is all ~FjR~
Virginia Jasmin Pasalo Beautiful, ................Hasmukh! 8 hrs · Unlike · 1
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Awww lovely ink tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings 3 hours ago by angel mia pg to Final wish
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It was not only soul’s meet But with warm greetings too