Fever Poem by Uzefa Rashida M.A

Fever

Rating: 5.0


Down with fever
was my love forever
my eyes all over
on my child with fever.
Body hot, lips dry
my child slept with a cry
moaning and groaning cry
paining and hurting cry.
The heat was felt
the pain was felt
the cry was painful
but I was all hopeful.

The fever would subside and
my baby would sit upright.

Thursday, March 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: care,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 01 April 2016

Awwwwwww such sensitive poem...God bless the child. You penned down so beautifully the pain a mother goes through seeing her child ill. Perfect 10++++

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 03 April 2016

Thank you Aarzooji you understand me the best. Thank you for your comforting words.

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Kim Barney 03 October 2016

You have expressed very well the concern a mother has for a sick child. Nice poem indeed.

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Aarifa Almas 27 April 2016

Yeah..A Mother gets very tensed and depressed when her child suffers from any ailment.. Very well expressed the pain a mother goes through..10++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 April 2016

Spilling of pain from a mothers heart is strong here. Very nice.

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Salman Sayeed 04 April 2016

This poem shows the affection of mother loves to child..... This poem shows the way that how mother feeling struggle in his heart when his child suffered from fever

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Anas Affan 03 April 2016

nice lines......shows your love and affection towards you baby.She will be fine very soon inshallah

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 03 April 2016

Thank you Affani for your dua. Thank you for your appreciation.

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Uzefa Rashida M.A

Uzefa Rashida M.A

Pernambut, Vellore District, Tamil nadu, India
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