Hey! I M Here. Poem by Uzefa Rashida M.A

Hey! I M Here.

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A small little bee
sat upon my knee
to gather my attention
of her presence.

She buzzed along my ears
she closed near my eyes
I was frightened and backed
till I completely was hers.

Once I sat watching
She could feel my eyes it seems
I wondered why she wanted
to grab my attention.

Now the bee was calm
or it seemed so to me
I looked at her how she
moved her body and fluttered her wings.

Indeed God's creation
though minute and tiny
still worthy to be praised
and sought for attention.

Her wings so tender
her body so slender
her little presence
did have essence

The essence indeed
is the life she held
within her tiny frame
which no one ever pondered.

Friday, February 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: creation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A small creation of God like a bee too has a meaning in its existence as it has a life too. Life is the most precious gift that God has bestowed upon us.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 19 February 2016

Very true, nothing on this earth is meaningless, all are created with some purpose and they serve mankind in one or the other way, some we understand and others we don't....A thoughtful poem.10

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 19 February 2016

Thank You Asim for sharing your views about my write. I grateful to Almighty that i have great friends.

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Aarzoo Mehek 19 February 2016

Indeed God's creation though minute and tiny still worthy to be praised and sought for attention. awwwwww cute poem. You are absolutely right every speck of existence is important and beautiful. Thanks for this beautiful reminder Uzefa.10++

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 19 February 2016

Aarzooji thanks so much for your love and support.

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Denis Mair 15 May 2016

This poem reminds me that life's essence is known through relatedness. Depth of soul is known by resonance with other beings. Our fellow creatures enrich our lives and help us know our place in the creation. .

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Aarifa Almas 26 March 2016

A very cute, very chweet yet very powerful poem.. Each Lil creation of Almighty has its own importance.. Truly blessed are all His creations.. N so are you with such beautiful thoughts... 10++++++

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Nosheen Irfan 26 February 2016

So true..every creation is a miracle and has a purpose of its existence. A nice poem to draw our attention to the essence of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 February 2016

Great work! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Barry Middleton 20 February 2016

A nice reflection on even the smallest piece of nature. It also made me think of how we humans tend to fear things we do not understand. Bees don't sting usually unless you swat at them. They are a lot like people.

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Uzefa Rashida M.A

Uzefa Rashida M.A

Pernambut, Vellore District, Tamil nadu, India
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