Two Hearts Poem by Uzefa Rashida M.A

Uzefa Rashida M.A

Uzefa Rashida M.A

Pernambut, Vellore District, Tamil nadu, India

Two Hearts

Rating: 3.4

Two hearts
I waited for you dear,
for you to come near.
I waited for you long,
for you to sing a song.
What maketh you so dull?
What maketh you to cry?
Why don't you come to me,
to share with me my joy?
I often wondered why,
You never ever smile,
What makes you shed a tear?
What is that you fear?
Weakened is your heart,
burdened with your sorrow.
Could you lend me some
if I would like to borrow?


You waited for me dear,
I too wanted to be near,
I want to sing a song,
but don't know what I long.
I do, feel your joy
your joy makes me cry,
my sorrows may lessen your cheer
that is what I fear.
I do want to smile,
When my loved ones are near
but always shed my tear
when a brilliant laugh I hear.
Strengthened is my heart
unburdened are my sorrows,
your little words of love
has made the distance narrow.

Come to me my love
Hold my hands in yours
for I want to enjoy the moment
forever being yours.

Two Hearts
Friday, February 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: true love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Here I would like to show how hearts get connected.A true heart recognises the pain of another heart and makes an attempt in breaking the ice. Sorrows if shared makes life easy to live. So a true loving heart finds a true loving and longing companion.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 28 February 2016

my sorrows may lessen your cheer that is what I fear.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - an interesting dilemma, how do we get close to another soul if we don't share our sadnesses as well as our joys

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 01 March 2016

Thank you Susan...You are right that everyone needs to share their joys as well as sorrows and i wanted to show that sharing and caring brings hearts near.

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Ramesh Rai 19 February 2016

A true submission to the beloved one... A soulfu soulful write that can never be denied.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 19 February 2016

Thank You Sir for reading my work and giving your precious opinion about it.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 19 February 2016

thank you Sir for reading my poem and giving your precious opinion about my work.

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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

You have an incredible mind, Yue. Such beautiful work..! ! :) love it

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Seema Chowdhury 12 June 2016

A beautiful and a reflective write, take care

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 May 2016

Beautiful poetry. Love is not just two hearts getting to know each other, it is they share the happiness, the pain of one another. Very fluent rhyming words, bringing forth the true mood of the poem. Good. And thank you for sharing. Do keep writing. One suggestion: 04th line in the second stanza could be corrected as: but don't know what for I long. It makes the line grammatically correct on one part. It give the correct meter to the line too. Pl forgive me if I am trying to correct an English professor!

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Kim Barney 03 April 2016

I like this, especially these lines: Weakened is your heart, burdened with your sorrow. Could you lend me some if I would like to borrow? What a great thought, borrowing someone else's sorrow in order to lessen his or her burden.

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Aarifa Almas 14 March 2016

Two hearts defines the true love where Pain and joy both the feelings are entangled... Truly awesome feelings expressed in ur beautiful poem by ur beautiful heart..

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Uzefa Rashida M.A

Uzefa Rashida M.A

Pernambut, Vellore District, Tamil nadu, India
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