Feeling Replete. Poem by Fay Slimm

Feeling Replete.

Rating: 5.0


Full to the uttermost brim
...................................with your love
I am replete, and
.................. muse now in moonlight.
Tonight is our chance
....................... to try stardust above,
Taste it with me
......................and digest its delight.

Our vows we repeat,
......................as fast the day fades.
In comfortable pose
..............with words almost poised.
Sing me a phrase or two,
..................... my thoughts get hazy
Above blank sheeted white,
.............................often then noisily
Writing off-key.
................... Passion sated we lie
Calm now within love's balm.
.......................... Replete I just sigh.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Georgia Girl 14 September 2009

This is such a peaceful write, makes me think of peaceful, heartfelt love shared eye to eye in moments of silence...gorgeous..10

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Bob Gibson 08 September 2009

Thy cup runeth over with love and devotion on a moonlit night fraught with emotion lovely poem Fay

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Randy Hogan 08 September 2009

under the stars I sigh to I hold you like Rose such a beautiful...profound write 10++++++

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Carol Gall 08 September 2009

aww the nights love wonderful 10

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Bob Blackwell 08 September 2009

I would say this was a perfect write, quite beautiful too. It was a lovely evening Fay. Love Bob

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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